right finally finshed hope you like - the rims i know aint the best but after the bg change every wheel never sat right untill these that were the best -i know some areas look crap but imo i wanted it finshed and cba any more with it cc please org http://autowp.ru/pictures/ford/focus/ii_hatchback/autowp.ru_ford_focus_ii_hatchback_18.jpg chop
not bad, need to be carefull about views through windows, also your tints dont seam to cover right up to the edges of the windows tim
ok well they edges of the window on the inside could be better, like i say the view through them is shabby,
Generally not bad. I like the way you've treated the bodyside and i quite like the tree reflections although they aren't strictly correct on the bumper. The wheelarch reflection in the body is a nice little touch. the negs.....for me its little things like the rear wheelarch flat-not concentric or balanced rear wheel appears to float a little the upper surfaces of the wheel arch extensions don't line up totally front bumper cutline-where does it go? view through the window-as said you could have applied more contrast to the front bumper highlights little bits of untidiness here and there The thing i really don't like is the front bumper not so much the rendering but the design-the surfacing is nothing like the rest of the vehicle, its all soft and looks like any number of badly designed real world kits. The focus is a very controlled design with tight radii and quite a clean technical feel and i think the bumper should match this.
Lmao, it's constructive criticism! No need to get agro, they're just trying to help you along. Maybe you were expecting only praise?
the comment never ment to come over that way, but tba i get better feedback on the 4 choping forums im on, i mean yes i know its basicly rank, update here
ive been mag featured 4 times now with my chops so my skills are not in question some very old stuff that i did over a year ago now, (images look rough like that so click for larger versions)
Don't take it the wrong way, theres no doubt you've got skills for this sort of thing, that much is clear, its just that when it comes down to it, if you're trying to do something photo-realistic everything has to be spot on and if its not it sticks out. As for better feedback on chopping forums, well, its hardly surprising really....... I'd love to stick up some of my work (which isn't perfect by any means) but i could lose my job if i did so and any of my nice personal stuff is going in the folio. btw tim, really like that last mk5-nice and clean without turning into a jellymould chop
yeh well said beanie, the more you do the better you get, i think i have seen some of your work mate and its spot on, you must be able to take constructive criticism mate, if not you wont improve, with a few hints and tips you will do well, a bit of phrase isnt a bad thing, just doesnt help you in the areas you want/need to improove on, tim
i can take crisitsm but you all just say rubish in a nice way all the thing pointed out i know about, anyway wat ever leave it at that
if you knew about them then why not rectify before posting? you obviously posted them on here for some comments and thats what we have given you, tim
im no photoshoper, but the paint on the audi looks flat, and the intercooler looks fake. focus looks quite well done, front bumper needs a little bit more defining, i'd agree, but on the whole its gud.
wow tim that audi is sooo sexy! well done! u have real tallent! wuldnt mind a chop of my car but cant do it
